17 May 2011

River poem!

Author: 6p | Filed under: Uncategorized

How i danced through the land

spreading magic from hand to hand

as the birds sang thier song

as they was stroling along

flowing down mountains

while people our sat beside me drinking from there water fountains

it was brilliant.


but then it was the day when it came

that day wasnt the same

all of my clear water was sloppy green goo

it smelled like a dirty old shoe

i couldnt servive any longer

all of my body was sore

and now i am gone.


2 Responses to “River poem!”

  1. elizabeth Says:

    i like your poemi think that it is really interesting well done

  2. 6p Says:

    This is a good poem from molly

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